Refining

this is what i have after the last critique. i have tried my best to establish a system by having a zoom up of the problems and also balancing it with the black and white spaces. i have somplified qute a few of them and erased excessive details. However the type is still not revised and i have to still look for more expressive type.

set of 8 spices

I keep in mind the unity of the icon. But I create the forms I had aproblem with the thickness . some of the looks different because of the scale. I have to groups of spices. One for countable spices and the other for uncountable spices. For example lemon is countable so I draw one lemon..etc.

In the class critique. I was suggested to have all of the spices in a group. So that I don't loose the unity of them. The critique was helpful and aware me of something that I wasn't consider at.

I chose arabic font that has thick and then parts and at the same time it's has basic handwriting feeling. The latin one also has the same texture.