Communication within Aspire

After I found the issues within Aspire I went back and took some photos so that I could start a storyboard of the different issues. When I went to Aspire I had prepared an idea so that I would know what images I needed to capture while I was there. I decided that I would show a person walking within the space and showing them getting lost and not finding their way. I would show him going to the signs to look for direction but the signing being unable to read. Then once the walker found his way along the path, his next issue is that he finished his water bottle and is looking for somewhere to throw it, he considers throwing the bottle on the ground with the others but then decides to keep walking until he finds a trash can. This way I show two issues and how the people have to deal with these problems while in this space.

http://www.flickr.com/photos/kcoston89/sets/72157613190717783/

After the critique I was told that I needed to go back and get more specific images and to focus on the micro and macro aspects so that my message is clear and therefore I wont have so many empty photos in my sequence.