my initial feelings when i see the poster its possibly a very chaotic place, Rough old and busy. i sense the rough mode in all of the building foundation of that place. you achieved the development of a qatari identity in the context of arabic region with showing the arabic sign and maybe by the arabic numbers on the wall surface too. the poster is very literal and straight to the point it talks about animal market with out even having the need to place a label showing that. You were very repetitive in using images with same animals but different angles! maybe if your point is to fill the poster and make it busy to capture the essence of the place then you should have used images of other animals. If the place is only about camels and sheep then in my opinion adding more images of those object dont add anything new. A bit of an empty space or less busy space would be good for the eye to absorb all the information *remember less is more :P*
the earthy color is obviously dominant and the repetition is clearly shown in your piece.
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ReplyDeletemy initial feelings when i see the poster its possibly a very chaotic place, Rough old and busy. i sense the rough mode in all of the building foundation of that place.
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the poster is very literal and straight to the point it talks about animal market with out even having the need to place a label showing that. You were very repetitive in using images with same animals but different angles! maybe if your point is to fill the poster and make it busy to capture the essence of the place then you should have used images of other animals. If the place is only about camels and sheep then in my opinion adding more images of those object dont add anything new. A bit of an empty space or less busy space would be good for the eye to absorb all the information *remember less is more :P*
the earthy color is obviously dominant and the repetition is clearly shown in your piece.
thank you amira :p I respect your opinion:p
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