Sunday, January 25, 2009

Khadija Safri, VCU

1 comment:

  1. 1st impression:

    . Colorful
    . Congested

    I like the individual pictures, but, I think there is too many images, which makes me lost. It also weakens some strong images.

    From the same concept you have more than one image, maybe you could simplify it.

    Some images are confusing, if you wanted to communicate that, then it's good, otherwise, exclude it.

    Very attractive pattern's images.

    In conclusion, the poster is quite busy and colorful, you have highlighted strong elements of your place. Reduction of colors, and exclude some pictures which doesn't strengthen your composition.

    Good Job!

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