Sunday, January 25, 2009

Fatima Al-Kharaz Dahl Al-hamam

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  1. hamzahJanuary 25, 2009 at 5:06 AM

    First Visually : i can see the poster divided into two parts the first one is the sky and the landscape which are making a kind of background and the other ones are the other elements which had put together... the cut between them is not gd where the sand thing is there specially ... there is a white border around the elemnts which is bothering .... the elements are put on the right side balanced by the text in not a gd way because the type it self is devided into two parts between the sky and the landscape.. the elements colors are bothering althought there is a contrast between but because the links between the colores it self inside the elements
    colores ... i think it can be much better visually ...

    Conceptually : i feel space .. i can feel mess when i look to the right side ... the signs are not working well with the subject because i feel that there is somthing not allowed .. i didnt like the dirty sign also because it says keep the garden clean and it is dirty it self.. the audience are children's families .. i can feel children in one part which is there game and because of the color ... no need to put the children them self or we can express them in a better way which is not direct .... they type is not working well with the poster because of the surfs and i cant feel playful since we are talking about a place which full of energy ..

    In general : i cant get that it is a place for children really well ... i can feel space and some not allowed places ... i think it is going to be better if take other palyful elements and change the composition ...

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